response to peer assessment

From our peer's feedback we have found out the following things:

1. We need to add rough footage of our own.
2. more detailed shot list
3. more student videos as examples.
4. a more detailed pitch

we have been marked 24-30 marks by two groups and 17-23 by another two.

and of course, the big assessment question

"why are we here?"

"cause of the Ducks"

"well.."

Wrong, all wrong.

For the next few session our aim to improve our blog with the following suggestions made by our classmates