GROUP 13 - Leo, Dan and Maili's Music Video

Tuesday 11 November 2008

Happy clappy feedback

We have had these general points said to us about our music video:

Performance/ lip-syncing--

General thoughts were good while there was some conflict in opinion where the lip syncing apparently 'kills' the narrative. which is fair, it breaks it up with an almost audible CLANK.

Relationships between music and visuals--

Good lyric -> visual correlation, makes it good. however after the half way point some viewers believe there is a decrease in quality.

Camerawork --

Apparently a bit jumpy which is good, office shots are favored.

Editing--

"yeah", "in time", "rewind related well to the song", "Strong wall shots", "walk into camera was good", "in time", "Dan was sooo hawt"

Special effects--

The CCTV shot was amazing and was the only part anyone focused on.

Mise-en-scene --

Costumes were great
child actor was sexy
After the narrative leaves the video ends badly

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Friday 17 October 2008

Child Actors

I first fell in love with child actors when I saw the motion Picture of "Lolita" and I thought that working with a child actor would be great and effective and useful.
Little did we all know it's slightly more complicated than that...
First of all it seemed as though Jake was totally up for acting for the big kids, getting to dress up and go out. Soon this attitude changed and he was reluctant to do as requested. Doing the same shots over and over again because he was looking at the camera or stumbled must have grated on his nerves a fair bit.
His sister, Leo heroically squeezed the last bit of footage out of him using bribes, blackmail and begging.

Unfortunately this means we have to make due with what we have currently, as no more footage can be obtained of Jake.
So forgive if at any time the shot looks slightly off or some sort of mistake occurs, since we couldn't go back over it.

But we can take as much footage as we want to of the other actor, so that is what we shall do to even out the quality.

And the rest...

We're going to have to use every chance we get to edit what we have, fitting hours of footage into about three and a half minutes is harder than one would think initially (and we're using speedups too).
But we're getting this done and after-all, is this not what media is all about? the lonely solitary tapping of keys; the endless cutting, editing and pasting into final cut; swinging from tree to mighty tree with camera in hand! Yes, this is Media 2008, Bold and Dynamic like the sea from whence it was birthed. DEAL WITH IT.

minor problems

There have been ump-teen problems hereabouts with my video footage-
Firstly) The inability to convert my footage straight from the HD camera.
Secondly) The lack of instinct to turn the footage into a quicktime file so it can be ready by Finalcut.
Thirdly) The fact that I need to sift through all the useless shots taken
Umpteenthly) I complain about all of these things regardless of the fact we have plenty to do anyway.

Aside from that we're progressing quite nicely...

Monday 13 October 2008

MUSIC PRODUCTION CRITICAL EVALUATION: PART 1



>>> Due on
Moodle by 9am Monday 20th October

MUSIC PRODUCTION CRITICAL EVALUATION

Part 1 should be about 1500 words in length and should consider the planning, shooting and editing to rough cut stage. You should make use of your blog as a reference point throughout! Where you refer to real examples for comparison, give web references and as much detail as possible e.g. artist/song and video director.

Introduction

Explain what task you did for the AS production and how this one differs from it.
(e.g. thriller/kids Tv)

Part One
Explain briefly how the work came about and what the tasks were.
(Talk about learning more techniques for final Cut, analysing some real music videos and looking at student examples,talk from promo director, music range of choices, etc)

Which band/artist did your group choose and why?
(give some positive reasons here)

How did you ‘pitch’ for them?
(summarise briefly)

Where did you get your ideas from? Cite actual examples as shown on your blog!

What tasks had to be done in the research and planning phase? How were these handled and what could have been done to improve them?
(talk about storyboarding, animatic, organising places, props, equipment, people)

How did the group come to decisions about approaches to the tasks to be completed? (what range of options did you consider and why did you opt for the choices you made?)

What roles did the various people in the group take on? Concentrate particularly on your role in the various activities.

Talk about any test footage you shot. What did you learn from doing these tests and from the animatic?

Write about the shoot. What went well/badly? what could you have done differently?

Consider your early editing and how you reached the rough cut stage. Outline this process and discuss decision-making you undertook.

What does the group feel about the rough cut? What feedback have you had from director/ other students etc? what still needs to be done?

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Friday 10 October 2008

UPDATE

So far...

Roughcut has been completed.

We still need :

Dan's footage - which should be completed over the weekend and ready for monday.

Next lesson we are hoping to really dive into editing and make sure all the footage we need is ready and present.

Getting a general order to the clips, and making sure we know which clip goes where and that there is enough narrative for the length of our song.

But, assuming our planning was right (which OFCOURSE it was) we shouldn't have any problems doing this - but it may take a bit of time to cut up all the shots we want and where we want them.

we have busy lessons ahead of us!

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ROUGH CUT




Here is our rough cut video of the work that we have got together so far. The gaps are of the footage we are yet to have, but will add in next lesson.

we're confident that we'll have the footage that we need, and hopefully also enough time to edit our videos to a high standard.

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Thursday 9 October 2008

Stuff and stuff

This is some more general research.





We thought we should add a video that was officially made for one of the Cage The Elephant's songs to show their ideas as a comparison to our own.

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Tuesday 7 October 2008

Tuesday 7th October 2008 Lunch/Last Lesson

Today we accomplished alot as a group, considering we were at college and had other commitments as well as our media project; as a group we are happy and anxious with the days events...

Leo and Dan had rounded around 10 of their friends up, and asked them if they were able to wear or bring a suit into college for today as we were going to shoot the 'executives scene' and by gosh, was it a success.

I (Maili) admit I was not much of a help as i was late in due to my bus not turning up, and was too ill to be be filmed but it didnt phase Leo as she was sorting out everything and had done about half of the filming by the time I had got there.

Everyone was very considerate of the fact we were under pressure for time and it ran very smoothly, we were able to film one after the other and everyone did it in one take and was happy to be appart of it.

We captured each of them as a stressed out business man, and some of them were able to lipsync with the song making it more effective as they 'freaked out' as the music climaxed during the chorus. Having quite a few people there will make the editing alot more effective as we have such a range of shots from different people's reactions to the song. Everyone was able to give it their own personal touch and definatly stood out from eachother.

Once we had finished filming me, Leo and Dan then went back to the lesson to upload all our footage, the music from the college video cam seemed to be out of sync so Leo put some skill into sorting that back out again so we were back on track, and we then uploaded the footage from my video camera to find out that the quality was not as we had expected it to be as a size setting was different to the other cameras that we had been using and we were unable to change this.

Being the brilliance that is my group, we managed to talk it over with our teacher and decide on what we were going to do, as we didnt have enough time to reshoot everything on another camera. We decided that most of the shots that were taken on my camera were of Jake, Leo's little brother, so we decided to edit the clips of Jake at work with some filters and so on, to give a negative, boring kind of vibe to mirror his life and his feelings from it. As Dan's shots will be on a different camera all together we're not as worried about these.

Leo will be reshooting the morning shots of Jake with a school camera where he is playing the role of a little boy so the only clips that will look a bit pixelated are of Jake at work, so this is why we're using it to our advantage and playing around with effects. Although my camera has been a let down, as a group we have got past it and all i can do is say sorry as it was my camera that has caused the problems!! :(

So with the new footage being done tonight, Dan also starting to record his, and the editing starting in tomorrow's lesson, we have definatly got on with it despite hitches.

Yay for our group! and they said 13 was an unlucky number.

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Lyrics to our chosen song

Tonight I’ll have a look
And try to find my face again
Buried beneath this house
My spirit screams and dies again
Out back a monster wears a cloak of Persian leather
Behind the TV screen
I've fallen to my knees

I said you got me where you want me again
And I can’t turn away
I'm hanging by thread and I'm feelin’ like a fool
I'm stuck here in-between
The shadows of my yesterday
I want to get away
I need to get away

Blanket of silence
Makes me want to sink my teeth in deep
Burn all the evidence
A fabricated disbelief
Pull back the curtains
Took a look into your eyes
My tongue has now become
A platform for your lies

I said you got me where you want me again
And I can’t turn away
I'm hanging by thread and I'm feelin’ like a fool
I'm stuck here in-between
The shadows of my yesterday
I want to get away
I need to get away

Now you know
Yeah you got my back against the wall
Oh god
I ain't got no other place to hide
Chained down
Like a sittin’ duck just waitin’ for the fall
You know
Yeah you got my back against the wall

Deep in the jungle
Camouflaged by all the fallen leaves
A hand holds up the sky
While shamefully I make my plea
The alters callin’
But my legs won’t seem to stand
Guess I'm a coward
Scared to face the man I am

I said you got me where you want me again
And I can’t turn away
I'm hanging by thread and I'm feelin’ like a fool
I'm stuck here in-between
The shadows of my yesterday
I want to get away
I need to get away

Now you know
Yeah you got my back against the wall
Oh god
I ain't got no other place to hide
Chained down
Like a sittin’ duck just waitin’ for the fall
You know
Yeah you got my back against the wall

Now you know
Yeah you got my back against the wall
Oh god
I ain't got no other place to hide
Chained down
Like a sittin’ duck just waitin’ for the fall
You know
Yeah you got my back against the wall

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Sunday 5 October 2008

Plan of Action - revisited

1. Friday - Sun rise - Dan
2. Saturday - Leo - Leo's House - Morning shots of Jake TICK
3. Wednesday - Dan's house - Morning shots of Dan TICK
4. Sunday - Leo and Maili - Town with Jake/office/bus TICK
5. Sometime before Wednesday - Dan - Park scenes.
6. Sometime before Wednesday - Maili, Leo and Dan - Wall scene, executives.
7. Sometime before Wednesday - Maili/Dan - Nature shots. Extreme close ups.

TO DO.

Sunrise shot. Maili or Dan.
Park scenes of Dan
Executive scenes 'back against the wall' lip syncing (hopefully Tuesday)
Extreme close ups of Nature. Maili or Dan... Probably Maili.

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Filming at the weekend.

Me, Leo and Jake went filming on Sunday. Leo and Jake first went into Cambridge to film the shots of Jake making his journey towards 'work'. Leo filmed him walking through crowded streets and getting on a bus towards his office.

Me, Leo and Jake, also accompanied by my dad, then met up in Fulbourn and drove to my dad's office which is located in S&B Herba Foods Ltd. Leo did a few location shots outside and also filmed Jake walking into the building. We then started shooting jake at the office desk typing and generally doing work for about 10 or so minutes from different angles.

After getting most of the shots we needed we were able to get the final shoots of the music video. We got shots of Jake throwing papers around, and the final shot of him standing in the fallen paper staring directly at the camera.

Overall i think the filming went well and I am very grateful for dad letting us use the office, and also the patience of Jake, Leo's little brother who we wouldn't of been able to do it without, He was an excellent actor.

Leo and Jake also managed to get the morning shots that we needed for the music video on Saturday; which has also put us at a brilliant advantage as we have all of Jake's shots now completed and Dan has done some of his. I think as a group we've achieved alot from this weekend and hopefully we can finish filming as soon as possbile to be able to start editing as early as possible to get the biggest advantage for our final peice.

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Reply from Maili's Dad's work.

From: Graham Carter (graham.carter@sbhf.com)
Sent: 03 October 2008 17:19:36
To: Maili Seljamae (mugzthebeast@hotmail.co.uk)
Cc: Reino Seljamae (reino.seljamae@sbhf.com)

Hi Maili,



No Problem ~ we will all have to make sure that we leave our desks tidy tonight !



Hope the shoot goes well.



Very best regards,



Graham Carter.

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Friday 3 October 2008

research images



Here we have the classic 'little boy' stereotype. Boys are 'supposed' to get dirty out, playing in the mud. We think this will be a great way of symbolizing the man's craving and dream of having no responsibility again, and have a life where all he has to worry about is his mum telling him off for ruining his clothes.


http://hof.povray.org/images/bigthumb/office-13.jpg

This is what we're hoping to use for our office scene, this isn't the actual place we will be shooting but the real thing is very similar. It is a group room which I think is good because it shows that the boy isn't an important person in the company otherwise he would of had his own office. It also gives a sense of claustrophobia which we are trying to achieve through some of the other scenes




We wanted a playground such as this with the bright colours and play equipment which symbolizes the little boy's personality and lifestyle.

http://www.xperthr.co.uk/blogs/employment-intelligence/iStock_000002525555XSmall.jpg

Here is a great example of the frustration of being in a boring job that we are trying to create (obviously without the comic value) we want the amount of work and the boring daily routine, ontop of the stressful job to finally create an over whelming feeling that he needs to explode and release the feelings that have been bottled up.

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Letter to Maili's Dad's work, for permission to shoot in their office space

From: Maili Seljamae [mailto:mugzthebeast@hotmail.co.uk]
Sent: 03 October 2008 08:48
To: Graham Carter; Reino Seljamae
Subject: A Level Media Project

Dear Graham

I am currently a Media studies student from Long Road Sixth Form College, working on a project for my A level grade.

I have been asked to make a music video with two other people, and our plan for a small part of the video is in an office location. Which is why I would like to ask you if we were able to use your office space for a brief location shot as part of our project; it will be a great advantage to us and we would be ever so grateful

The date in which we would like to shoot this would be Sunday 5th October 2008, with the presence of my father, Reino Seljamae.

Thank you very much for reading

Yours sincerly

Maili Seljamae

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Thursday 2 October 2008

chorus brain wave

we've been pondering over an idea to fill 19 seconds where dan will be 'transforming' into Jake, and visa versa.

When the chorus hits we will rewind the video that has happened to far to the scene where Dan and Jake leave the house, but this time they will come out as each other and continue their routine of the other person. This will then continue like our previous plans.


Are we great or are we great?

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response to peer assessment

From our peer's feedback we have found out the following things:

1. We need to add rough footage of our own.
2. more detailed shot list
3. more student videos as examples.
4. a more detailed pitch

we have been marked 24-30 marks by two groups and 17-23 by another two.

and of course, the big assessment question

"why are we here?"

"cause of the Ducks"

"well.."

Wrong, all wrong.

For the next few session our aim to improve our blog with the following suggestions made by our classmates

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Plan of action.

So we've just figured out the reality of how much time we have compared to how much we need, so we're getting our arses in gear and deciding on who is doing what.

1. Friday - Sun rise - Dan
2. Saturday - Leo - Leo's House - Morning shots of Jake
3. Wednesday - Dan's house - Morning shots of Dan
4. Sunday - Leo and Maili - Town with Jake/office/bus
5. Sometime before Wednesday - Dan - Park scenes.
6. Sometime before Wednesday - Maili, Leo and Dan - Wall scene, executives.
7. Sometime before Wednesday - Maili/Dan - Nature shots. Extreme close ups.

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Tuesday 30 September 2008

Shot List

Starting from the start:
-morning shots, half darkness, perhaps of bikes in bikeracks and cars driving or swings swinging with no children on them and the like.
-Shot of the sun rising for the boodledwee, that may take a while to shoot.
-Slowly emerging into the house
- the business man is awake and almost ready, lots of high angle shots of the man as he moves around the house (perhaps mounted from doors and surfaces).
-Claustrophobic closeups on certain parts of the active body, i.e. really close up on the feet while shoe-tying is in progress. Getting ready in general is the flavor for these scenes.
- Shaving, shaving cut, goes a little crazy for the buildup of the music.
- Eye transforms to Eye as boy awakens
- Boy wakes up, shot of him getting out of bed
- Boy gets ready, brushes his hair, gets dressed
- Boy in bathroom brushing his teeth in the mirror
- split screen shot of both man and boy picking up briefcase/lunchbox
- split screen shot of both man and boy leaving their houses.
- shot of man hurrying to work walking through crowds
- shot of man on buses sitting in traffic, busy buses
- shot of boy in the park playing and having fun
- shot of boy playing in the mud
- spit screen shots of both man and boy leaving their houses, but this time as eachother
- shot of boy hurrying to work looking at his watch, dodging through crowds
- shot of boy on crowded buses in rush hour traffic
- shot of man playing in the mud
- shot of man playing at the park, climbing trees
- shot of boy in office
- shot of boy trashing office
- shot of boy getting really angry
- shot of business men and women against brick wall angry
- shot of business men and women against brick wall lip syncing to words

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Band Research

'Cage the Elephant' a self proclaimed "rock/punk/funk" play instruments typical to a band of their genre. Based in Bowling Green, Kentucky, U.S.A, this band has so far released only one album entitled: Cage the Elephant, (ha ha, original) which debuted on the 23rd of June 2008.
So far very little can be found about this band, as many of the sites visited either sell the few singles they have or advertise.

Their songs seem to follow the pattern of a long buildup towards a chorus, starting rather quiet and building up, (which is also the same for Back Against the wall) and yet there can be a definite change in the style of music they perform, for example, in the song 'In one Ear' it follows more of a funk/rock sort of rhythm, whereas in our studied piece they seem to go for a more new soft rock style of music.

Thursday 25 September 2008

Props, costumes and possible locations

Props
  • Alarm clock
  • Comb
  • Mirror
  • Bed
  • Razor
  • Briefcase
  • Mobile phone
  • Watch
  • Lego
  • Toys
  • Park apparatus
  • Desk
  • Papers
Costumes
  • Suits
  • Kid's clothes
  • Pajamas
Possible Locations
  • Park
  • Office - Maili's dad's office
  • Leonora's house
  • Daniel's house
  • In town - Cambridge.
  • Buses, around Cambridge

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Sunday 21 September 2008

GROUP 13 - Music Video Animatic

Here we have our animatic for our music video idea. We have included different types of shots and current ideas that we hope to incorporate into our filming.

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Thursday 18 September 2008

CHILDREN IN SUITS









We decided to find pictures of children in suits because of our current idea to dress a young person in the same style of clothes to create a business man look.

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BUSINESSMEN




We got a picture of a business man as research into the costumes for our performers who will also be dressing in suits

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Thursday 11 September 2008

Is there some correlation?

"Back against the wall" - Wall (too obvious? Maybe a fence instead...) both characters will be shown against it at some point, once with their roles reveresed and then reversed again. -beginning and end respectively- These two characters are fundamentally the same person, however they remain utterly seperated by the different attitudes that are expected of them.

A park would be nice to use, there is nothing better to show childhood innocence than the colourful fun of a recreational ground. Currently, the Haslingfield rec is under some minor construction; it's surrounded by a lot of rather tall metal gates, which seems like an absolutely perfect image for this music video.

Equipment available: Three cameras, final cut, a macintosh.
Props and locations: A small suit for the little gentleman. A big pair of dungarees for the scary hairy man (also with colourful shirt). An office space (if all is planned well). Potentially a wall at some point. A park (with/without a creepy fence).

Insainity is a keyword in this music video; a slightly unhinged teen with a strangely intense prepubescent, hopefully some inspiration will hit on how to appropriately portray the mindset of these characters without something mindless.
(perhaps in the background or setting...)

Children



We thought we would add this picture of the children playing because we wanted to show the innocence and care free attitude children have. This is a reflection on the attitude of our actors in our music video as we hope to get this message accross

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Tuesday 9 September 2008

Videos Similar to our idea.


Pink - Family Portrait
(embedding disabled D:)

This video has strong themes of nostalgia and childhood, particularly the breakdown of happy childhood memories. The inner child is seen here as a completely different person to the singer seeing a side of split personality. we can see both sides of her story, thinking back to childhood memories and also the thoughts and feelings of her mum and dad, who's marriage is ending. The grown up and child is a good way of showing two sides of one life from different age groups and perspectives. one being innocent and one being more serious.


Blood Red Shoes - ADHD

This video combines the feelings of freedom and claustrophobia. Hyperactivity is also (obviously) a strong theme. claustrophobia is one of the main feeling in our music video. There is the literal claustrophobia of being on a crowded bus in rush hour, having to share a stuffy room full of desks and office equipment with no personal space, but you also have the psychological side where the man is having go through the same things everyday, boring and dull.


The Vauxhall Zafira advert

This advert shows the role reversal of a child acting as an adult. This is the attitude we want from our child actor to have, but not a care free 'family man' but a stressed out business man; having a visual idea such as this one gets the point accross the quality of what we're expecting to achieve from our video.

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Pitch For Music Video

The song we've chosen is 'Back Against The Wall' by Cage the Elephant.

Upon listening to the song, we realised that it gave us a lot of plans as far as imagery and shot ideas went.

This is our pitch:

We think that the song invokes a real feeling of freedom and natural environments at the beginning, and so this will be incorporated in our video. We're thinking childhood, innocence and nostalgia: mud piles, long grass and mucky, tatty clothes. The role of previous childhoods, or the inner child fondly remembered will be played by Daniel Swanton; playing in mud, climbing trees and generally not giving a toss about tomorrow. The role of modern childhood, the innocence tattered and the child made man before his time will be played by Jake Mayall, Leonora's younger brother (assuming all goes to plan).
The chorus of the song invokes in us a sense of being trapped and being forced to do things against your will. We will incorporate this with shots that feel claustrophobic - trapped behind bars, stuck in a crowd etc.
It will be edited to heighten the feeling of freedom and claustrophobia respectively.
The climax of the song will be shown with the reversing of roles, Dan in the suit and Jake in the mucky togs.

This is our plan outline:

The song will start to the clip of a sunrise which has been speed up later in editing.
Once the words kick in it will cut to Dan turning off his alarm and getting out of bed.
You will see shots of Dan getting ready for work and basically doing day to day activities
We will then have a shot of Dan looking in the mirror shaving, where she cuts himself and gets angry, you will see him frustrated throwing his razor down and the camera will then zoom into the angry eyes of dan and pan out to see that we are now looking into the eyes of a little boy that has just woken up.
You then see the little boy's routine, he gets up, brushes his hair and is generally a lot more relaxed and care free.
[note: shots like looking in the mirror brushing his hair will be at a similar style to the ones of Dan looking in the mirror when he's shaving.]
there will then be a split screen of Dan picking his briefcase up, and Jake (the little boy) picking his lunch box up.
they will then, both again in split screen leave their houses. Dan more hurriedly and Jake strolling.
We then have clips of Dan hurrying to work through a busy city, bus shots, traffic jams rush hour etc.
Between clips of Dan we will have Jake playing at a park or just doing kiddy things.
As the song begins to climax again as it comes to the chorus where the whole of the video so far is rewound to where the split screen is with both of the them leaving the house. but this time they have swapped places
We will now have Dan dressed up in bright kid's clothes with a lunch box and dublo blocks
And it will then show Jake in a suit with a briefcase hurrying off to work
Now we will see Jake hurrying around on buses trying to get to work on time in comparison to Dan who will be playing in the mud, and playing in the park with not a care in the world.
We will then go to a shot of Jake finally getting to his office, and finally snapping from the pressure and strains of adult life and he starts throwing papers everywhere and 'trashes' the office.

we will also shoot a separate piece in which there will be business men and women against a brick wall, letting out their stress, being angry and hoping to get a bit of lip syncing to the song. This should include me and Leo in these shots and also some others from our group which is quite good for timing.

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Tuesday 2 September 2008

R1 - MUSIC VIDEO CD TRACKS 2008/9

R1 - MUSIC VIDEO CD TRACKS 2008/9

1. You're My Flame - Sia 3:18
2. I Got Da Feelin - Sweet Tee 4:15
3. Bouncy Ball - Ladyfuzz 2:48
4. Don't Want To See You - Camera Obscura 3:17
5. Fantastic Six - Alphabeat 3:39
6. No Looking Back - Anti-Social Burn-Outs 3:09
7. Heroes - Hot Leg 2:44
8. Oh My Sweet - The New York Fund 3:39
9. Friends Are False - The Delays 4:10
10. Boston - Augustana 4:06
11. Back Against The Wall - Cage The Elephant 3:48
12. Harm's Way- Waco Brothers 2:42
13. Powers - Blackalicious 3:47

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Monday 1 September 2008

Welcome to GROUP 13

HELLO WORLD.

welcome to the blog of group 13.

it's group members

Dan

Maili

Leo


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We rule all.