Happy clappy feedback

We have had these general points said to us about our music video:

Performance/ lip-syncing--

General thoughts were good while there was some conflict in opinion where the lip syncing apparently 'kills' the narrative. which is fair, it breaks it up with an almost audible CLANK.

Relationships between music and visuals--

Good lyric -> visual correlation, makes it good. however after the half way point some viewers believe there is a decrease in quality.

Camerawork --

Apparently a bit jumpy which is good, office shots are favored.

Editing--

"yeah", "in time", "rewind related well to the song", "Strong wall shots", "walk into camera was good", "in time", "Dan was sooo hawt"

Special effects--

The CCTV shot was amazing and was the only part anyone focused on.

Mise-en-scene --

Costumes were great
child actor was sexy
After the narrative leaves the video ends badly

brought to you by: Iran Pirate Radio